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The chart below shows information about fuel used in transport sector in 6 EU countries, compared to the average.
主體段分段：按照 <趨勢(shì)> 分段
Body 1：EU average，Poland、Spain、Greece【上升趨勢(shì)】
Body 2：Slovakia、Austria、France【下降、平穩(wěn)】
開(kāi)頭段
The bar chart compares the proportion of sustainable energy used for transport across six European countries, comparing each country's usage with the European average in 2009 and 2010.
概述段
It is clear that on average, European nationsincreasedtheir renewable energy usage,whileSlovakia and Austriaexperienced declines.Besides, Greece was the only country thatconsistently had lower level ofconsumption than the European average.
思路要點(diǎn)：
- European average數(shù)值上升，但Slovokia和Austria數(shù)值下降
- 只有Greece兩年數(shù)值都低于European average
Body paragraph 1
The European average of renewable energy usage in transportincreased marginallyfrom 4.2% in 2009 to 4.9% in 2010.This rising trend was also observed inPoland, Spain, and Greece.Among them, Spainsaw the most significant rise,withits renewable energy consumptionreaching the EU averageby 2010. Poland’s usagesurpassedthe average levelin both years,climbing slightlyfrom 5% to 6%during the given period.In contrast, Greececonsistently had the lowest figures,withits sustainable energy consumptiongrowing modestly to2% in 2010.
思路要點(diǎn)：EU average，Poland、Spain、Greece
- EU average：2009年為4.2%→小幅度上升到2010年達(dá)到4.9%
- Poland、Spain、Greece數(shù)值也上升
- Spain：上升最顯著，2001年數(shù)值和EU average持平
- Poland：兩年數(shù)值都超過(guò)EU average，從5%小幅度上升到6%
- Greece：兩年數(shù)值都最低，小幅度上升到2010年達(dá)到2%
Body paragraph 2
However, the remaining three countriesexperienced a different patternin their consumption of renewable energy.Althoughthe energy consumption in Slovakiadropped significantlyto 7.8% in 2010, ittopped the listin both years. The figure in Austriaalsodecreased,falling remarkably to5.1% in 2010,slightly abovethe EU average for the same year.Meanwhile, Francemaintained stableusage at 6.1% across both years.
思路要點(diǎn)：其余三個(gè)國(guó)家
- 其余三個(gè)國(guó)家數(shù)值趨勢(shì)不同
- Slovakia：數(shù)值大幅度下降到2010年的7.8%，但兩年內(nèi)數(shù)值都最高
- Austria：數(shù)值也下降，到2010年達(dá)到5.1%，輕微超過(guò)EU average
- France：數(shù)值保持平穩(wěn)在6.1%
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